Doug’s 12 year-old niece recently turned in this writing assignment. We give her an A+.
(submitted by Rachel)
Great use of adjectives!
I love the last line “He is also pale.”
Me too! It’s the hook. I’ll give her A+++
I’ve seen college essays that weren’t that well written (sad but true)! Well done, Miss Rachel. Thank you for sharing.
Great writing, Rachel! So nice to hear more of the background of AFP from the other side…
Cute letter. And as awkward as her grammar is in a few places, I’ve seen a lot worse in many eBooks that I’ve read. GREAT JOB RACHEL!
P.S. Doug, work on that tan!
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