A Letter From Rachel

November 20th, 2012

Doug’s 12 year-old niece recently turned in this writing assignment. We give her an A+.

(submitted by Rachel)

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6 Responses to “A Letter From Rachel”

  1. Chelsy says:

    Great use of adjectives!

  2. Anna says:

    I love the last line “He is also pale.”

  3. Minda says:

    I’ve seen college essays that weren’t that well written (sad but true)! Well done, Miss Rachel. Thank you for sharing.

  4. Lissy says:

    Great writing, Rachel! So nice to hear more of the background of AFP from the other side…

  5. Sam says:

    Cute letter. And as awkward as her grammar is in a few places, I’ve seen a lot worse in many eBooks that I’ve read. GREAT JOB RACHEL!

    P.S. Doug, work on that tan!

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